Trong clip hướng dẫn dạng bài Map, mình đã cho các bạn 8 cấu trúc quan trọng. Hôm nay mình sẽ cho thêm các bạn một ví dụ nữa về cách áp dụng các cấu trúc này vào bài viết.
Hãy xem đề bài sau:
Trước hết, mình sẽ viết các câu mô tả như sau:
– In 1990, there were many residential houses in the southwest area of Templeton, but those houses were demolished in 2005 to make way for skyscrapers.
– There was also a construction of a new big supermarket close to the skyscrapers.
– An airport was built in the north.
– All the trees and houses near the coastline disappeared and were replaced by a large factory.
– The railway was lengthened, and it was located along the coastline.
– A new ferry was constructed in the southeast area of the resort.
– The school and the hospital still existed until 2005.
Sau khi viết được các câu mô tả như vừa rồi, mình sẽ ghép chúng vào với nhau bằng cách dùng các linking phrases: ‘and’, ‘also’, ‘while’, ‘whereas’, ‘additionally’, ‘meanwhile’…
Như vậy, chỉ cần dùng 8 cấu trúc mình đã cho, bạn có thể viết được một bài Map hoàn chỉnh.
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Thank you for your sample structures which are simple yet effective . Following is my essay written in accordance with your guidance.
The maps show the development of the seaside resort called Templeton over a period of 15 years from 1990 to 2005.
It is clear from the maps that the biggest change happened at the resort was the construction of high-rise buildings and stations of public transportation.
In 1990, there were a school and a hospital in the northeast area of Templeton. Residential areas which were mainly constituted by small houses and trees occupied the rest three fourths of the resort. In 2005, low-rise buildings to the west were destructed and replaced by skyscrapers as well as a supermarket. Meanwhile, all trees to the southeast disappeared to make way for a factory.
There were also constructions of a new ferry station in the southeast corner and a new airport close to the school. While the railway was lengthened to run along the coastline, the hospital and the parking lot remained unchanged over the period shown.
Anh ơi cho e ngu tí đó là sao mình dùng skyscaper mà không phải building hay apartment vậy anh? hay do skyscaper nói chung cho các loại kia? 🙁
Dùng từ nào cũng được mà em. Ở đây anh thấy trong hình là nhà cao tầng nên dùng skyscrapers thôi, còn dùng 2 từ kia cũng được.