IELTS Writing Task 1: Bài mẫu pie charts “Energy production”

Hôm trước mình đã lập dàn bài cho đề Pie charts “Energy production”. Dưới đây là bài mẫu đầy đủ của mình.

The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The pie charts compare various types of energy in terms of production in France in two years 1995 and 2005.

It is clear that the percentage of Coal being produced was highest in both years. By contrast, the figure for Other types of energy was by far lowest.

In 1995, Coal’s production accounted for the highest proportion, at 29.80% of the total energy production in France. The rates of Gas and Petro produced were slightly lower, at 29.63% and 29.27% respectively. Meanwhile, only 6.40% of the total production belonged to Nuclear energy.

In 2005, the percentage of Coal produced insignificantly went up and remained the highest figure in the chart, at 30.93%. The figure for Gas rose slowly to 30.31%, while Petro’s production experienced a dramatic fall of nearly 10% to only 19.55%. There were sharp increases in the figures for Nuclear and Other types of energy to 10.10% and 9.10% respectively.

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